My super pumpkins had withered and died by the time I returned, and the raspberries are prone to the same demise, because every time I expect to be back in 2 hours, something else distracts me from my farming.
Writing dialogue like you actually talk is one thing. TFWG is whole nother thing, way more important. You still have to break independent thoughts out with commas, and complete thoughts with periods, and make it easier to read. Otherwise, we'd just string all the words out together like the Greeks did it back in the day: no punctuation hardly at all. Notevenspaces.