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Whomever is in charge of the "B's" website should consider re-writing Annettes intro, to make it less confusing. She jumps from subject to subject like a hummingbird in a nectar farm. I would also tone down her desire to be the "Town drunk". Young people do look at the site and might wonder why she wants to be with T-pot only to drive her around to go drinking while T-pot is prego and has sit and watch. Sounds to me like the movie "driving miss Daisey". Well, for those who have not read it, heres the quote.
http://b97.com/pages/964280.php#SlideFrame_1
"Hi, I'm Annette! I'm so happy to be back in New Orleans on B97! I lived in our great city for several years just before Katrina, but I knew I wanted to come back as soon as I could.
I'm engaged to marry a man who practically never speaks (Mike) and that's great for me. I can do the talking and he can listen.[EDIT]
My only real hobby is drinking. Okay, when I say it like that it sounds kinda pathetic. But really, it's pretty fun. (Drink responsibly and 21+ only of course) It's the best when one of my friends is pregnant and I can talk them into still coming out to dinner and being the designated driver. I'm working on talking T-Pot into hanging out more.
But anyway, the whole drinking thing is one of the reasons I'm so happy to get back to New Orleans.
Oh - wait - my other hobby would be TV.[EDIT]
I love working for B97, but if I could have anybody else's job - it would be Kristin from E! who does all the TV show stuff. Or maybe Samantha Brown from the Travel Channel. That's a pretty sweet gig she has."
So after reading it, I came away with this impression:
She's a frequently entoxicated couch potato, who bosses her soon to be husband around and already wishes she could have some job elsewhere because the only reason she's here is to drink 24/7. Now I don't know A.W. , but I would re-write this so not to make it sound so negitive and scatter-brained. Also, don't harp so much on the drinking thing, maybe say how much you miss the people here and you want to help in the recovery.
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http://b97.com/pages/964280.php#SlideFrame_1
"Hi, I'm Annette! I'm so happy to be back in New Orleans on B97! I lived in our great city for several years just before Katrina, but I knew I wanted to come back as soon as I could.
I'm engaged to marry a man who practically never speaks (Mike) and that's great for me. I can do the talking and he can listen.[EDIT]
My only real hobby is drinking. Okay, when I say it like that it sounds kinda pathetic. But really, it's pretty fun. (Drink responsibly and 21+ only of course) It's the best when one of my friends is pregnant and I can talk them into still coming out to dinner and being the designated driver. I'm working on talking T-Pot into hanging out more.
But anyway, the whole drinking thing is one of the reasons I'm so happy to get back to New Orleans.Oh - wait - my other hobby would be TV.[EDIT]
I love working for B97, but if I could have anybody else's job - it would be Kristin from E! who does all the TV show stuff. Or maybe Samantha Brown from the Travel Channel. That's a pretty sweet gig she has."
So after reading it, I came away with this impression:
She's a frequently entoxicated couch potato, who bosses her soon to be husband around and already wishes she could have some job elsewhere because the only reason she's here is to drink 24/7. Now I don't know A.W. , but I would re-write this so not to make it sound so negitive and scatter-brained. Also, don't harp so much on the drinking thing, maybe say how much you miss the people here and you want to help in the recovery.
[EDIT-content originates from a copyrighted source. It has been truncated as the post exceeds fair use. In the future please do not pull the entire citation verbatim from such sources. Thank you for properly attributing the quote. A URL linking to the originating content has been provided below as a courtesy by Radio-Info.]