This is about TV, not radio, but I wanted your opinions.
What's missing from this news story? I'll transcribe exactly as it aired.
Slide: California Teacher goes to jail
Anchor: A student breaks up with her teacher after the teacher is arrested for for having sex with a minor. Police arrested that 41 year old teacher for having a sexual relationship with a minor. It happened back in 1998. That teacher is now in jail in California
B-roll Video: man talking from behind a window, shot over the shoulder of unknown light haired person. cut to still shot of sign "James C Endocis High School - CIVILITY" and another of empty school parking lot.
Anchor continues. Now he also had a relationship with this other student, and she just recently broke up with him.
Still shot of unidentified girl standing with her apparent mother.
That's it. entire story.
If it weren't for the DVR's ability to freeze-frame, nobody would have caught the name of the school and therefore been able to figure out what this story was about.
This story aired on one of our local TV station's 6pm newscast. Did somebody forget the 5 W's?
-amos
What's missing from this news story? I'll transcribe exactly as it aired.
Slide: California Teacher goes to jail
Anchor: A student breaks up with her teacher after the teacher is arrested for for having sex with a minor. Police arrested that 41 year old teacher for having a sexual relationship with a minor. It happened back in 1998. That teacher is now in jail in California
B-roll Video: man talking from behind a window, shot over the shoulder of unknown light haired person. cut to still shot of sign "James C Endocis High School - CIVILITY" and another of empty school parking lot.
Anchor continues. Now he also had a relationship with this other student, and she just recently broke up with him.
Still shot of unidentified girl standing with her apparent mother.
That's it. entire story.
If it weren't for the DVR's ability to freeze-frame, nobody would have caught the name of the school and therefore been able to figure out what this story was about.
This story aired on one of our local TV station's 6pm newscast. Did somebody forget the 5 W's?
-amos